Friday, June 1, 2018
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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Kia ora, I am Keira from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you said that you like playing rugby and other different sorts because lots of people share the same interests
I learnt that the people that inspire you have the same interests
Maybe you could say more about the people that inspire you because we don't really know who inspires you
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://gisintkeirae.blogspot.com/
Mā te wā
Keira
Hey sam, I was just reading your pepeha and it was very great and I loved the creative work you put into it. Great Job!!
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